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Get professional eyes on the pages agents and readers judge you by. I'll critique your first 10 pages and tell you exactly what's working, what's not, and what to fix first with the why behind every note.
What's included:
Margin comments throughout your first 10 pages, plus a 1–2 page summary letter with your top 3 priorities, in order. I evaluate whether your opening hooks the reader, whether the reader will care about your protagonist, whether the pacing serves the story, and the classic opening traps like starting too early, backstory dumps, over-explaining. You're welcome to include a one-page synopsis at no extra charge so I can read your opening in context.
How it works:
After checkout, you'll receive submission instructions right away. Send your first 10 pages in standard manuscript format (1" margins, 12pt Times New Roman, double spaced — the submission instructions include the details). Your annotated pages and summary letter will be emailed to you within 5 business days of receiving your submission.
Not sure if this is the right service for where you are? Email me before you buy and I'll point you to the best fit.
Get professional eyes on the pages agents and readers judge you by. I'll critique your first 10 pages and tell you exactly what's working, what's not, and what to fix first with the why behind every note.
What's included:
Margin comments throughout your first 10 pages, plus a 1–2 page summary letter with your top 3 priorities, in order. I evaluate whether your opening hooks the reader, whether the reader will care about your protagonist, whether the pacing serves the story, and the classic opening traps like starting too early, backstory dumps, over-explaining. You're welcome to include a one-page synopsis at no extra charge so I can read your opening in context.
How it works:
After checkout, you'll receive submission instructions right away. Send your first 10 pages in standard manuscript format (1" margins, 12pt Times New Roman, double spaced — the submission instructions include the details). Your annotated pages and summary letter will be emailed to you within 5 business days of receiving your submission.
Not sure if this is the right service for where you are? Email me before you buy and I'll point you to the best fit.